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Comic: The Ruse... (Part 1/4)

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Part 1: You're looking at it
Part 2: [link]
Part 3: [link]
Part 4: [link]

Finally... my Internet has come back (that's why I haven't been on for almost a month) It completely died, and its only just been fixed (Over the last month its been "fixed" many times, but only now has is actually been fixed)

As a result of having no internet for a month, I spent a lot more time on this comic than usual, (it does not show) most of it spent on backgrounds, I'm gonna start drawing my own backgrounds in future ( I hope it doesn't take as long though, they took 10+ hours each..)

So anyway, this comic.. It's odd, I have no idea where the plot came from, but oh well..

4 parts, each rather short (It actually fits into 2 parts, but then each one is awfully huge)

I didn't draw the backgrounds in this part, (I edited some though) credit for them should go here

:iconcloudshadezer0:

Also, because I am feeling ridiculous, I'm gonna request Critiques, Go ahead, tear it to pieces!
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:star::star::star::star::star-half: Overall
:star::star::star::star::star: Vision
:star::star::star::star::star-empty: Originality
:star::star::star::star::star: Technique
:star::star::star::star::star-half: Impact

Vision: The art with the shadows makes it look all dark while still being able to see the ponies, which is good <img src="e.deviantart.net/emoticons/s/s…" width="15" height="15" alt=":)" title=":) (Smile)"/>

Originality: I don't see much art and comics set like this, so the general idea is funny, but I've seen Derpy comics where the muffin falls over so that's not really original, unless you came up with that idea.

Technique: The lines manage to look different yet special at the same time, if that makes any sense. That's good <img src="e.deviantart.net/emoticons/s/s…" width="15" height="15" alt=":)" title=":) (Smile)"/>

Impact: It was funny! Pinkie sounded just like she usually does, but some grammar errors and word choice didn't sound quite right.